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Notes in Bathrobe Pockets

Posted on Dec 15, 2006 by in Forms for Writing and Healing, Healing Poetry

Foggy this morning. I’m thinking (again) about those pieces and images that can pierce through fog. For a writer. Or for a reader. The kinds of things that Janet Desaulniers is talking about, I think, when she talks about collecting. In his book, A New Path to the Waterfall, a book about, among other things, navigating loss, and navigating the approach of death, Raymond Carver includes an apparently simple poem: “His Bathrobe Pockets Stuffed with Notes”. The poem is made up of of thirteen fragments. Here are three:

Those dead birds on the porch when I opened up

the house after being away for three months.


“We’ve sustained damage, but we’re still able

to maneuver.” Spock to Captain Kirk.


The rabbi I met on the plane that time who gave me comfort

just after my marriage had broken up for good.